Maybe sharing too much

Our History - "My name is Jeremy. Before I started Vibrant Family LLC & Vibrant Styles brand, I never expected to be doing this. I spent most of my life doing other type of work. The most recent job I had was working in a medical manufacturing plant, which I enjoyed but I was working up to 15 hour per shift. It was difficult and just got to be too much for me keep going. Within a few days of leaving I woke up one morning with severe pain and back issues. Even after some recovery I found I still can't handle the physical work very well anymore. I had to look for options that I could do in short spurts of time and that didn't require long periods of sitting or standing. I decided to try online sales and an apparel store. I discovered I actually really enjoy the designing part. I especially like making motivational and inspirational designs. Recently my wife had some health issues and had go to the Emergecy Room and resulted in an unexpected surgery and being out of work for months. I thank the doctors, our family, and friends that saved her life and helped us get through things. We still have a lot of medical bills and debt to pay off but we are grateful and hope for a better future. Basically this all boils down to we're just normal people trying to live life, get out of debt, and thank God for any blessings and help. Your current and future patronage is truly appreciated!"